I have revised my outline April 7th, thanks to more feedback. I have added a new paragraph (2nd to last) trying to answer some concerns.
Abstract Outline-Bamboo
In order for bamboo to be localized not only would it need to be grown here, but also the materials would also have to be manufactured here. The right species of hardy-bamboo have already had great success in many locations towards the lower main land. If bamboo were to be grown at a much larger scale, it would be possible for a company to begin manufacturing building materials made of different species of bamboo. In order for these materials to be categorized as green they must be blended with other environmentally friendly material, which has already been done by a large amount of other bamboo building material producers.
Anyone is able to grow bamboo in B.C. but it must to be started in spring to maximize growth potential. Bamboo doesn’t need any unhealthy fertilizers making it an environmentally friendly material to produce. Finding a company to harvest bamboo would be a challenge at first, but with the understanding of this smart investment, individuals would gain interest quickly. Bamboo needs a large space to grow, because such large amounts would be needed in order to gain, and keep the interest of a manufacturing company. This problem would be the largest barrier of producing these materials. Growth costs are inexpensive; the land would be the most expensive part, and maintenance of bamboo is easy with some minor weather protection during the cold seasons.
Trees, and lumber, are vital to BC’s way of life, but we need to begin thinking of alternatives as well. Bamboo has a lot in common with wood, and in some views is even better- Bamboo Generates 30% more oxygen than wood; By replacing wood with bamboo in specific cases (such as plyboo which is a plywood made of bamboo) we can keep tree consumption to a minimum, and take advantage of this quick growing grass. Some finishes such as wood finishes can be replicated by bamboo in many different ways. Bamboo can easily be used to create building members as well.
Bamboo already has special characteristics which make it a green material to most of the world. By producing, and manufacturing this material locally would introduce a new selection of bamboo materials to our market. This creates the possibility of environmentally friendly construction, and minimizes the unnecessary wood consumption.
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Pretty good draft man, but it needs some cleaning up in places. I'm more than willing to help out by going over a proofread with you.
The content of the abstract is very good, but I didn't really see the big 'question' (thesis) that you're going to be answering - at least not in really clear terms. I would make this very clear, probably near the beginning of the summary, and then continue on to explain how it could be effective. You sort of answered the question, but didn't state the question that you were really asking.
"Bamboo rocks. Other countries have used it for decades and they think it's pretty killer too. How can we make it work here in Kamloops?
We can grow it during spring...."
It needs a bit of work in regards to English and such, I'll do some proofreading for you if you'd like!
Can you add figures to an abstract? I'm not certain. I've never seen it done before.
Hey travis i think this is a good start to your outline interesting. I agree with Derek and Morgan. From my understanding you would like to find land in kamloops which you could harvest bamboo on and then manufactures goods with it?? Anyways, reading your abstract will help me to write my own thanks :)
P.S.
I can help edit your abstract as well if you like.
Oh by the way your blog is looking fancy...very nice :)
Morgan, I apreciate the proof reading. Its not exactly my strong point as i'm sure you noticed.
Cari, Ya that does make sense. Im trying to Apply it to British Columbia because The lower main land, and even the Island seems to be a lot more successfull for producing bamboo then anything I have heard of here in Kamloops.
Derek, I can never use to much proof reading.
Thanks a lot for all the input. Its helping me a lot.
Hey Travis.
I agree with Morgan in although you've sold me on how great bamboo is, im not sure what you are analyzing. How much of the marketplace bamboo could take over? How much demand there is for bamboo as a building material (structural members) or finishing material (flooring etc)? If it could be a new industry for BC (perhaps to replace lumber?)
Along with those questions come more: could mills already in place be converted to manufacture plyboo, for instance. Or are there any companies in place that own good land and the manufacturing facilities to begin making bamboo products? Or is it a sustainable crop - as in does it deplete the land? Are there any other useful crops that can be planted as a companion to it, such as hemp etc. What else is needed to manufacture bamboo products and can we or do we already manufacture them here? Is there a market to export it? And on and on.
Either way, its a great topic, and if you want me to edit it for you too, just toss me a copy sometime in class.
shevaun,
Ya some of that has been on my mind, and you have brought up a lot of new ideas as well. For my abstract outline I have basically let you know where i am at this point. I haven't yet gone into great research to covor all of those topics. But, that will help me out for over the summer ect.
Here are a few books from Chapters to check out. Hope these help.
New Bamboo: Architecture and Design
| Hardcover
Marcelo Villegas | VHPS RIZZOLI | October 21, 2003
Bamboo Style: Exteriors, Interiors, Details
| Trade Paperback
Angelika Taschen | Taschen | May 1, 2006
Bamboo Style
| Trade Paperback
Gale Beth Goldberg | Gibbs Smith Publishers | October 1, 2004
Brandy, I already have all those books on my web link called 'bamboo books available' but thanks for your time!
Hi Travis,
The link I sent you before didn't work (Thanks Dale). Here you go. I hope THIS one works!
http://www.sustainablebuildingcentre.com/forum-topic/the_2006_international_bamboo_building_design_competition
I looks like you have all the help that you need here, but I will add my two cents. I still think that the issue is not so much about weather or not we can use bamboo in construction, but how will this change the way that we design? I am sure there are production and manufacturing issues that will need to be sorted out if we are going to use a lot of bamboo, but we are not studying agricultural engineering here. We need to be concerned with the most efficient way to utilize this material in construction. Should we be using it for everything? Are there some materials that are better than bamboo for certain applications?
I hope this does not confuse the issue, but you need to find some way to apply all this knowledge that you are gaining.
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